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Koreini and Ori Again

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If you hear a bump and a scream in the night,
That's not the boogieman, that's my brother.
Oh he'll tell the ladies he loves them, and then you'll see 'em turn up dead in the alleys.
Jack the Ripper in the 20th century.
Brother,
You never stop disgusting me.

If you hear someone screaming bloody murder in the middle of the night,
That's not Bloody Mary, that's my sister.
Oh, she might act sweet when you meet her, but she's a cobra she is, a raven in her own dark paradise.
A modern-day Edger Poe.
Sister,
You never stop disgusting me.
Second try!

Bit more on their occupation.....
*shrug*
I kept to my own moral law (never to write somethig I don't aggree with unless it is for a grade) and the law of my mother (don't do anything I (she) dosen't aggree with).

I think this is better than the other one, personally.

For :iconalieasilverfox:
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fiction-freak's avatar
Wicked! I love the opening for the first one. I sorta giggled a little when I read it.
Oh and I noticed one thing. You have "That's just my bother" instead of brother.
Otherwise it's brilliant and dark. Great job!